Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
it is highly unlikely that one goes through life without having challenges. Therefore, some people opined that negative circumstances, such as unsatisfactory job, should be tolerated, while others suggest that it is better to work towards improvement. my believe is that, we should learn to know when to fight to make bad situations better, and time to live with them.
On the one hand, acceptance of problems is a foryof mental defence mechanism that ensure contentment and happiness at all cost. this is because the mind is already conditioned to manage such crisis without having to be pressured to find solution. For instance, some cultures and religion believe that life is already predestined, so humans have no influence on the happenings. Evidently, people of such faith are more satisfied with life, whether it is the good or bad occurence.
On the other hand, it is fairly common characteristic of living beings to aim at seeking means of getting out of difficult issues. that is why desert animals will migrate to areas where they can access water, in a bid to survive the heat; and not just waiting in the region of scarcity, trying to cope. this attribute is not limited only to animals, but also humans. it gives hope that keep us going and also invariably take away the challenges, if we work hard enough.
Concluding, my opinion is that both attitudes to life issues must be balanced. while managing crisis, without seeking solutions might result t poor standard of living, working hard for better condition too can result in unnecessary tension and sadness; especially when the effort fails. so, we must be able to identify which situation needs to be managed and the one that need adjustment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 288.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97916666667 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72501982097 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 106.607317073 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 283.868780488 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1681357374 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160155897486 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049223513424 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551133510649 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929776228315 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05890688389 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 40.7170731707 204% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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