The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the causes of choosing bicycle or car for journeys to work.
It is clear that the main reasons for choosing bicycles are health and fitness that are provided by riding on a bicycle and less pollution that bicycles produce. Furthermore, the total of these reasons is 60% with both of them having a 30% share. The last three causes of choosing a bicycle are approximately equal and take between 12 and 15% for faster journey time, low costs and a lack of parking problems.
The major reason for driving to work is the comfort of the journey that cars provide and it takes 40% more than the second cause by almost two times. The next main reason is the huge distance to work and it takes 21%. The last three reasons are almost the same in importance and take from 11% for the safety that a bicycle cannot provide to 14% for being able to carry stuff to work and for higher speed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mately equal and take between 12 and 15% for faster journey time, low costs and a...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n the second cause by almost two times. The next main reason is the huge distance t...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...huge distance to work and it takes 21%. The last three reasons are almost the same ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45508982036 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19678067074 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1181160439 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167861398135 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957005802516 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052642634102 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135875968578 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237125344835 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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