The first graph illustrates the proportion of five reasons why people choose bicycle to work, whereas the second graph shows the reasons why people tend to drive by car to work. Overall, more than half of the people travel by cycle for health and to avoid pollution, while the main reasons for using car is for comfort.
From the first graph, it is evident that 60 per cent of them people use bicycle for their fitness and also with the idea of creating less pollution, while 15% of the people choose bicycle to avoid parking problems. No costs and faster limit influenced 13% and 12% of the people respectively.
Regarding the second chart, comfort is the main reason for 40% of the people to choose a car for a drive to office, while 21% of the people use car due to the distance from home to work place. 11% of the people feel that car driving is safer to cycling and hence use car. The remaining 28% of the people use car as it is faster than cycle and can be used to carry things to work place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bicycle'
Suggestion: to bicycle
...rtion of five reasons why people choose bicycle to work, whereas the second graph shows...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bicycle'
Suggestion: to bicycle
...llution, while 15% of the people choose bicycle to avoid parking problems. No costs and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, regarding, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37234042553 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13145937292 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9925965014 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262382313863 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134367363465 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766169688935 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191630122021 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801624786813 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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