The charts below show total British exports and the countries that Britain exports to.
The pie chart illustrates various products that Britain exports, while the bar chart shows the money that was earned through these exports in millions of pounds in year 2010 and 2011.
Overall, it is clear from the pie chart that UK’s biggest export is vehicles, while pharmaceuticals are second in line. The bar chart shows that generally the exports increased in 2011 as compared to last year except to France, which remained the same. We can also observe that the highest exports were to US, followed by Germany both years.
According to pie chart, the biggest export of UK is vehicles, which accounts for 34% of total exports. It is followed by pharmaceuticals that is around 25% of total, whereas third place is held by gems and precious minerals at 20%.
The bar chart makes it obvious that US is the highest export partner, as it accounted for a little over 30,000 million pounds of exports in 2010 which increased slightly to 32,000 million pounds in 2011. The second largest export partner was Germany which in 2010 bought about 20,000 million pounds of goods, which later increased significantly to about 27,000 million pounds in 2011. The least amount of exports were sent to Ireland, which generated a little less that 15,000 million pounds both years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 386, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to about 27,000 million pounds in 2011. The least amount of exports were sent to Ir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94418604651 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42358164126 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516279069767 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.440652627 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.111111111 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28006011187 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137542785318 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666006238805 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198785109206 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516855046728 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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