The charts below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006

Essay topics:

The charts below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006

The charts Illustrate data about consumption of energy sources in the UK and US in 2000 and 2006. Overall, oil was the highest energy in USA in two years. The difference in UK, coal was the most used energy in UK in 2000 and gas was the highest used energy in 2006.

Overview in the first chart, the two main energy in both countries were oil and coal. In the UK, coal was the most preferable energy get up to 30% and oil has reached 28% only less 2%. However, in the USA, oil was the most consumed gain 36% with the percentage difference only 1% by coal. Meanwhile, consumption of other energy such as gas, nuclear power and other renewable sources is less than 20% in both countries.

On the second chart, in the UK, gas was the most consumption run into 38% and coal decreased to only 14%. The difference case in the USA, oil was the highest consumption in the USA at 40% followed by coal and gas with the same percentage gain 25%. However, consumption nuclear power and other renewable sources were no more than 15%.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42631578947 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37303060204 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442105263158 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4653065859 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.1 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325148676995 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152461726628 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111679599429 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259620433918 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123556375895 0.0819641961636 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.