Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century The map below shows the development of the village

Essay topics:

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

The map shows the growth of population that Chorleywood experienced over a period of 128 years between 1868 and 1994. Village is located near London.

Overall, it can be seen that as more transport infrastructure was improved as more village grew, it is also worth to note that residential areas were built only near main road, motorway and railway.

Between 868 and 1883 Chorleywood was a small village and situated on the east side of the main road. Then for the next 39 years village grew down to the south alongside main road and a stretch of railway was built running across south part of the village from west to east. Chorleywood station was constructed in that part.

From 1922 to 1970, Chorleywood expanded alongside the railway from west to east. In 1970, a motorway was built on the east side, which run directly from north to south. Then for the following 24 years Chorleywood experienced dramatic change, when new part of the village grew next to the main road, motorway and railway. Nowadays, Chorleywood Park and Golf Course is located between motorway and main road.

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Average: 4.8 (4 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88172043011 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54743414876 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3428247122 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137879292473 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770424862361 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671207706125 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113176904481 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865645924358 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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