The climograph below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

Essay topics:

The climograph below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

The climate graph reveals the number of temperature and precipitation period of a month.the data is calibrated in Celsius and million meter. Which is clearly and coherently represented.
It can be seen that, the rainfall in the city of Kolkata.in addition to, during the three month of year. However, The rainfall city of Kolkata increased was 10, 15, and 20 (mm). furthermore, during the three month of the year: April, may, and June . ratherthan, the temperature city of Kolkata had been decreased 8 (°c), 4 (°c), and 2 (°c). While, during the two month of year : July and august the rainfall of the city was 300 (mm) and 340 (mm) respectively.
As far as trend was concerned, during the two months of year : September and October. Either, the rainfall in the city was decreased 300 (mm), and 250 (mm).apart of all, during the two month of the year : November and December . The temperature city of Kolkata had been decreased 4(°c), and 2(°c).
Overall, it is evident that monthly figure of precipitation in kolkata stabled moderately .while, the down fall take high level in the middle of the year.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...year: April, may, and June . ratherthan, the temperature city of Kolkata had bee...
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... and June . ratherthan, the temperature city of Kolkata had been decreased 8 °c,...
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... the two month of year : July and august the rainfall of the city was 300 mm and ...
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...ature city of Kolkata had been decreased 4°c, and 2°c. Overall, it is evident t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, may, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77127659574 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74628995428 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.505642796 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5454545455 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301193231126 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135497130386 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791387979558 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172801440137 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894337263127 0.0819641961636 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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