Nowadays, people throw away old things and adapt new things.do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantages?
One of the most controversial issue today relates to nowadays, whether this unusal culture very beneficial or harmful own society ? In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On one side of argument there are people who argu that disadvantages.the main reason for believing this is that,demand for more increase use of machinery creating more population however, wastage ta electricity gas.furthermore, it is also possible that to say that, drifts and competitive mass between friends.such as boliling, isolation.
on the other hand, it is possible to make the opposing case it is often argument that infact, ratherthan, society moves forward ,and than people often have this opinion because increase employment in our country a part of all these, it second point is that, stable the economic growth, within development the personal growth.
Overall, as we have seen that, there are number of answers to this question on balance.however, I tend to believe that many people do not throw away usuall things in society.they should be reuses the some material, and than reuses the some things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 182.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2032967033 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98159422921 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.906881389 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.4 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136249034228 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063577354268 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046167163652 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744794053134 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404573573681 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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