The climograph below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in city of Kolkata.

Essay topics:

The climograph below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in city of Kolkata.

The given climate graph represents, an average monthly temperature and precipitation in the city of Kolkata.The data is calibrated in millimetre and celsius, which is clearly and coherently represented.

It can be observed that, 50 mm rain occurs in first quarter of the year, and gradually increased to 100 mm in the month of May.It sharply raised to 250 mm in June month.Further, it shows slight variation in the months of July, August and September.Moreover, the precipitation was 150 mm, 10 mm and 5 mm in the month of October, November and December respectively.

As far as temperature is concerned, it shows January as the coolest month.The temperature further roses in the month form; February to May by 20°c to 30°c.The figures levelling off in the average of 20°c till the end of the year.

Overall, it is evident that the monthly precipitation in Kolkata stabled moderately while the downfall take high in the middle of year.In contrast temperature which shows slight variation during the year.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1265060241 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23805687697 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1678736246 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 212.75 112.824112599 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.5 22.9334400587 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288069404366 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180125390048 0.103423049105 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533408510441 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180125390048 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533408510441 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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