Comparision of three maps in different time period

Essay topics:

Comparision of three maps in different time period

The following maps compares a particular region in three time horizons, covering the development witnessed over the period of time.

The three maps of Meadowside village and Fonton depicts the period of 1962, 1985 and as on current date. Over the time it can be seen that both village and Fonton has expanded and now are connected with each other.

With respect to development, Meadowside Village has seen development of Leisure complex, Housing estate and Super Store during the year 1985. Around same time, Fonton has expanded its region. Connectivity between two places through road was established.

Further development took place post 1985, and currently name of the Meadowside Village has changed to Meadowside Suburbs. In middle of Fonton and Meadowside suburbs, we can see development of an Hotel, a Business park and a Station.

In conclusion, we have witnessed how the connectivity of two regions of Meadowside Village and Fonton was increased, which in all led to development of other infrastructure as well.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'compare'.
Suggestion: compare
The following maps compares a particular region in three time horiz...
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Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ring the development witnessed over the period of time. The three maps of Meadowside vill...
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Line 13, column 193, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...side suburbs, we can see development of an Hotel, a Business park and a Station. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
well, in conclusion, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34146341463 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89843954817 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5512818081 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158274864485 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812319905904 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120986523802 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117890506041 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139021467351 0.0819641961636 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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