The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

Essay topics:

The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

The pie chart depicts the average percentage of nutrients in typical meals during the day, which can be unhealthy if consumed in larger proportion.

Overall, dinner is the maximum source for sodium and saturated fats, whereas intake of added sugar is maximum in snacks. Breakfast is the least source for intake of all these nutrients, however in case of sodium, consumption is least even with snacks.

In case of Breakfast, mere 14% of sodium and 16% of other two nutrients are consumed. In case of Lunch, intake ranges from 19% to 29%, where minimum intake of added sugar takes place with 19%, which is followed by saturated fats of 26% and lastly with sodium of 29%. The intake of added sugar is just over 40% (42%) which is maximum for snacks, along with 21% of saturated fats and 14% of sodium. Maximum intake of Sodium which is around 43% is through Dinner, along with 37% of saturated fats and 23% of added sugar.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71165644172 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2787591849 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.787142819 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107738100805 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627820677199 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982990287956 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12230816339 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125039520452 0.0819641961636 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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