The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.
The diagram illustrates manufacturing process of the goods made from the leather.
Overall, it can be seen that there a total of eleven stages in the process, beginning with the drying of animal’s skin and culminating with ready goods for consumption.
To begin, animal skin is drying on the stick, once it is dried the leather is delivered by track to the factory, then animal skin is washed in the mixture of water and Lime. Following that the skin is soaking in lime after it was soaked the skin is go through Flattering process.
After it was flattered, the skin is put into the Tannin were water mixed with vegetable matter to the reason for soaking. Then the skin is passed to the polishing process, and after it was polished the skin is delivered to the factory by the track. Finally, there are different items are produced in the factory.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...in lime after it was soaked the skin is go through Flattering process. After it w...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...ttered, the skin is put into the Tannin were water mixed with vegetable matter to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71333333333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56860532845 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0044476794 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0746102801742 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481345912897 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856936126319 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810534664338 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100577838681 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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