This diagram below provides us information about how a product goes through a life cycle by affecting environmental problems.
Overall, it is clearly seen that the product which people use in the market goes through step by step in a life circle by affecting the environment.
Firstly, in case of designing a new product it has to be planned very carefully. Everything needs to be taken into account and calculated. Therefore, planning and design is the first main step in a life circle. Secondly, after completing with a plan, energy resources and consumtion materials are obtained and ready to produce. Thirdly, the product is produced, but it is definitely not ready for distribution. Before distribution, It needs packaging and only after completing with it, it is gone to sales departments or online shops. Finally, customers can use the product and enjoy in step six, however, in some cases it goes to disposal in case of not using it, because people may not like the quality. On the other hand, it becomes old one day and people get rid of that product. Moreover, good manufactures take a feedback from users whether they hava any problems with it or not. Last step of a life circle is recycling the product and life circle starts again, but with a new plan and design.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, as to, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83181818182 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74838419848 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2348155468 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5833333333 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149354771421 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541074987267 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530287350838 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125359852301 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515431307674 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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