the diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station
Discuss summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparison wherever necessary
The diagram provides the information about generation of electricity in a hydroelectric power station.
Overall, among very few sustainable energy resources, water is used to run this kind of station to generate electricity. Power generation occurs when water flows through the turbine and causing it to rotate thereby, the generator coupled with the turbine harness this force to produce electricity.
First, hydroelectric power station uses the man-made structures like dams to store water in a higher altitude, and the power stations are located in relatively lower altitude. River water is stored in dams are directed into the power station through an intake, which faciliates the flow of water towards and away from the station. During the day water flows to the lower altitude whereas, in nights water flows to the high-level reservoirs.
In the low lying power station, water flowing from high-level reservoirs helps the turbine to rotate and this rotation aids the generator with electricity generation, later the electricity is transported elsewhere by power lines to the national grids.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, whereas, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50588235294 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83858729911 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1180521091 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.714285714 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198153854447 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124054611103 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113304874563 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177816729453 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11892238076 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 61.2550243902 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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