The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

The given diagram gives information about a production of the electricity for a particular country throughout a power station operated by hydroelectric.
In general, although the production started during daytime, the closure begins in night time as well as a process begins from a high-level tanker in the day. However, reverse direction commences a low-level barrage.
First of all, when the sun rises, the water is collected from the river in Dam after that the water flows to generator. Unless the water exists, no electricity in the state. Moreover, the engine finalized the production, the electronics sends to power lines to national grid to lighten the streets and provide electricity to every house and factory.
However, in the night, the opposite process commences from low-level reservoir. In addition, the generator pumps water to high-level collector then closed the production until the next day. In spite of the existing of other resources, the common method to produce is that installing engine and infrastructure near the river.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gine and infrastructure near the river.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, in general, as well as, first of all, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37575757576 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94219797526 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6999866773 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5555555556 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5555555556 5.23603664747 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122592696932 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471261763215 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672454259157 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807736146373 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811386075618 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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