The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Given is a diagram providing information on the steps of electricity production in a hydroelectric power station.

A brief analysis of the figure reveals that there are five linked stages in this process where the river water starts its travel for generating electricity from higher-level reservoir to the lower-one at the ending point.

The procedure commences with storing river water in a dam, equipping with a higher-level reservoir. To continue, there is an intake under the wall of the dam, which is open during day time and closed at night. In the next point, there is a generator in the station connected to reservoir turbines, which are responsible for operating the generator. Electricity producing from generator transports from power lines to the national grid.

Moreover, the reservoir turbines control the flow of water, passing water from the higher-level reservoir to generate electricity within the day time and pumping it back to that point through the night. It is also interesting to note that during the day water keeps in the lower-level reservoir for moving back behind the dam at night.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90176617142 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7028445504 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178452361619 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097640650123 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114456918187 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151252011338 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124500782872 0.0819641961636 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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