The diagram illustrates a process in which how electricity can be produced by a manner called Geothermal.
It is clear that the process contains 5 main steps to get the energy of the steam and use it in a mechanical process for generating electricity.
The first 3 steps belong to turning water into a hot water and then steam. Water which stored in a big tank goes down for about 4.5 km by the use of gravity force until it arrives in the injection well. Then it will be led to the geothermal zone containing hot rocks which increase the temperature of water and will send it through the production well to be pumped up.
The fourth step is condensing hot water to gain a higher water pressure which turns hot water to steam that could be used to run the turbines. The spinning of turbines will be the source power of the generator. Finally, the generator produces electricity in the 5th step.
- Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harmful chemicals may be doing to the 52
- Some parents offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think this is a good idea 90
- Alternative energy is any way of creating power for humankind to use other than the burning of fossil fuels which is harmful to the environment Some examples include solar panels which derive usable energy from the Sun s rays and wind turbines which colle 80
- Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harmful chemicals may be doing to the 3
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage 3
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54601226994 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60087970827 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570552147239 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3530453912 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0937138418224 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460837570042 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462897997358 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769025905758 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451625975968 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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