Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of how much teachers would influence the society. I definitely think that teachers were more appreciated in the past than they are today. It is my firm believe that for a number of reasons, the value of the teacher's work are significanlty understimated and they are not valued as they deserve nowadays.I will develope these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, there is no doubt that this era is the era of the internet and social media. More access to the internet, more online tutors and free courses the Individuals have and this can influence people's opinion about the role of teachers. They may neglect the role of teacher by assuming that the internet can do what teachers used to. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. I used to be a private tutor years ago and the people's appericiation was inspiring but, as soon as the use of internet became popular, my job opportunities declined. It is certainly clear to see why society do not appereciate teachers as they used to.
Secondly, the parent's encounters with the teachers has declined these days because they do not enough time to take care of modern life’s tons of responsibilities. The lack of communication between teachers and the society might be misunderstanding for the parents as they may assume that teachers have a shadow role in their children lives. Drawing from my own experience as a teacher, the parents who did not attend in the school meetings had less respects for the school’s staff. It is certainly clear to see why society have less respect for the teachers nowadays.
In light of the reasons mentioned, although there are always some exceptions which are excluded from the general trend, I strongly believe that the society have mush less respects for the teacher than the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun respects is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87195121951 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77205074237 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52743902439 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3158980077 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246984078839 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095299187378 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783311166563 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1512027466 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382219497248 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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