Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From the dawn of human civilization, learning has been a significant part of human life day to day. By learning new things, humans can improve themselves. teachers have always been an important part of learning. It is a matter of debate among experts and other people whether it is true teachers were more respected and enriched by society in the past than they are nowadays. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with that, for two important reasons.
First, teachers were one of the most important sources of learning in the past. people could not access the Internet in the past; thus, both teachers and books can help people get educated; on the other hand, nowadays, because of technology, people can get a lot of information and education that is available not only through text but also visual such as videos which can help them educated any time anywhere, without teachers. For instance, when I was in school, I had a problem in one of my courses, and I had an exam. I needed to visit my teacher in order to explain to me and solve my problem, but she had been sick, and she was not able to come to school for weeks. Finally, I could not find a solution; there, I took a low grade on my exam. However, nowadays, if you have any problem with your study courses, you can search on the Internet; by doing so, you overcome your course problems easily as well as quickly. It is obvious the rolling of teachers gradually becomes pretty weak than in the past.
Second, most teachers are experts in one major, and they do not have a range of variety of knowledge in several majors. Since the advent of technology causes, people, especially children, have become more curious than in the past, most of whom are hanger of new information; consequently, the knowledge of teachers nowadays are not able to cover this curiosity. I would like to provide an example; my brother is a teacher, he teaches hardware of computer; also he can fix every part of the computer. One day my nephew, who plays a lot of computer games, had a problem with their new game; he asked my brother for help; surprisingly, we figured out that she was a real master of some programs of computer, and he also gave some hints to my brother., that was really interesting. As a result, people can learn everything through the Internet, and they need teachers anymore.
To sum up, in my view, nowadays teachers are less appreciated and valued by
society, since people have become more curies than past; also they access technology which can help them get every information by the surf on the Internet. I hope people all around the world realize teachers are really valuable even though we do not need them as much as past.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Teachers
... things, humans can improve themselves. teachers have always been an important part of l...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ortant sources of learning in the past. people could not access the Internet in the pa...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chers are less appreciated and valued by society, since people have become more c...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5983436853 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53604511925 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503105590062 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.0296763924 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.894736842 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4210526316 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78947368421 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197988307396 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668430925731 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600613389382 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127449619362 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190280550925 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Teachers
... things, humans can improve themselves. teachers have always been an important part of l...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ortant sources of learning in the past. people could not access the Internet in the pa...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chers are less appreciated and valued by society, since people have become more c...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5983436853 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53604511925 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503105590062 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.0296763924 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.894736842 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4210526316 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78947368421 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197988307396 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668430925731 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600613389382 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127449619362 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190280550925 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.