Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From the dawn of human civilization, trying new things has been one of the most significant parts of human life; by doing so, humans have discovered a lot of things that led to them convenient life also helped them to live better and better than before. It is a matter of debate among experts and other people whether it is true or not; successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well. As far as I am concerned, taking risks and trying new have some advantages comparing only doing what people know how to do well, for two important reasons.
First, trying new things encourages every person to leave his or her comfort zone. When a person has decided to take risks, might face some difficult problems which can help him or her learn to how to handle their challenges; as a result, all of which help them become a prosperous person. For instance, I worked in a travel company as a technical manager for seven years. I had decided to establish my own travel agent, and I knew well, It was going to be tough, but I wanted to take risks in order to become a successful person; albeit I had sustained conditions as well as a good salary, but I preferred to get new experiences. After a while, I found my own travel agent, and I have become entrepreneurial; thus, I am so proud to have overcome all challenges. It is obvious that if I tended to stay in my comfort zone, I was not able to get new experiences, nor could I establish my own business.
Second, taking risks and getting new experiences can help you improve yourself. When you prefer to do only what thing you know how to do well all the time, you might get into trouble in some unpredictable circumstances. I would like to provide an example; I was running my own travel agency when Covid-nineteen broke out. Unfortunately, due to Covid-nineteen outbreak, all flights and tours have been canceled for a long time.
I was not able to run my business anymore without money; I had to pay rent and pay my employee. As a result, I had to stop my work, but I should do something for myself. I decided to study English and apply abroad. It seemed too hard; l had to learn a lot of new things to improve myself to become successful. Trying new things is not only helpful but also grateful in order to convey you to be an advanced person.
To sum up, in my view, to be a successful person taking risks and trying new things are requirements. All of these help you leave your comfort zone and achieve new experiences. I hope that every person all around the world has an opportunity to take risks and try new things.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, well, while, for instance, you know, as a result, as well as, in my view, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41443298969 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65331265025 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470103092784 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4844208248 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.952380952 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0952380952 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326509098452 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104915229587 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12821134333 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201374596301 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126838423381 0.0645574589148 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.