The graph illustrates the whole eight processes of manufacturing instant noodles from flour, water, and oil.
It is noticeable that there are 8 steps of producing instant noodles before the final product is delivered to the store. The flour will be mixed with water and oil, and the noodles will be put into cups with labels.
In the first stage, flour is put into tower silos for storage. Then the flour is mixed with other ingredients, such as water and oil, in the mixing machine. The mixture is rolled into sheets of dough and then cut into strips, which are the preparations for the noodles discs. The following step is to cook the discs with oil and wait for them to dry.
The final two steps include packaging the noodles. There are some cups ready for the noodles discs as the containers, when the discs are put into the cups, vegetables and spices are also added. The last step is adding labels around the cups and sealing them, the whole process of manufacturing instant noodles will be finished then.
The process manifests how to…
The process manifests how to ready-cooked noodles are manufactured in numerous factories.
At the first stage, the flour which is in the lorry, is pumped into tower silos to storage. Next, this flour is blended with some ingredients such as water and oil by the mixer. Then, the mixture is rolled to dough sheet by the rollers and cut into appropriate strips (long and diminutive), which are the preparations for the noodles discs.
The following step is to cook the discs with oil and wait for them to dry. Following this, these are numerous cups as receptacles where discs noodles and some pockets of vegetables and spices are laid. The manner ends with adhering some labels and seals on the cups and ready for deliveried to trade at every stores, supermarkets, so on.
Overview, the transaction emcompasses eight steps, beginning with taking the flour in the truck to mix and completing with gluing trademarks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70391061453 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3030179957 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525139664804 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4972880109 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860594701826 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389957620336 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427196622813 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701034040651 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368349001666 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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