The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon.
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From the given illustration, one can understand the different stages of life of salmon right from the hatchery till its demise.
The initial stage is the 'egg' which hatches in about 3 months in freshwater. After hatching, the salmon egg turns into 'Alvein'. As 'Alvein', it survives by eating yolk sac and remains as Alvein for several weeks. Then it moves on to the next phase in which it is called Fry. In this phase, the fry learns to swim and this phase generally lasts as long as it becomes 5 to 10 weeks old.
When several months pass, the fry slowly changes into Parr and develops 'finger' markings. Till then the salmon remains in freshwater and migration to sea takes place only in the upcoming stage in which it is called Smolt. It reaches this level when it is 1 to 3 years old and during this level, several Smolt form a group and move into the sea altogether.
Growing in the marine for the rest of the life, it becomes a full grown adult after living upto 8 years in sea. Then it starts withering away as it gets old and arrives at the final stage of 'Spawning adult' when it spawns and dies in 2 weeks.
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Suggestion:
...mon egg turns into Alvein. As Alvein, it survives by eating yolk sac and remains ...
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...ld and during this level, several Smolt form a group and move into the sea altogethe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34928229665 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19960432746 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569377990431 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6047444484 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6363636364 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0413521050414 0.215688989381 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0165901759475 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231391215976 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0296625091373 0.15604864568 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195915066973 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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