The diagram below shows the manufacturing process of sugar from sugarcane. Summarise the follwowing by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given diagram illustrates the process of producing sugar from sugar canes.The manufacturing process of sugar consists of 7 steps right from cultivating sugar canes to obtaining end product which is crystallised sugar.
The first and the foremost stage is the growing of sugar canes in fields. The growth of sugar canes can take an average of about 12 - 18 months before they mature. After 18 months, they are to be harvested. Reaping can be done either by harvesting machine or by manual labour. Once they are reaped, they should undergo crushing, a process in which sugar canes are turned to juice.
Then, the sugarcane juice will be purified using limestone filter. The purified juice will then be heated in an evaporator. In this process, the juice turns into syrup. Following the heating process, the syrup will be put under centrifuge in which sugar crystals and syrup will get separated. Later, in the final process, the separated sugar crystals will be dried and cooled giving the usable sugar.
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...s the growing of sugar canes in fields. The growth of sugar canes can take an avera...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01785714286 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50137037474 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.232563329 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6363636364 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166928994317 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587570205443 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667772100935 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129506746747 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838518458374 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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