The diagram below shows the process of milk production
The picture highlight the various stages involved in the production of cow milk. Clearly, this is a complex process, which requires certain conditions and a range of special machinery.
The whole production process begins with cows grazing on fields, eating grass from it. At the first stage, farmers use milking machine to extract raw milk from animals in an automotive manner twice a day. After that, milk is conserved in refrigerators until transportation vehicle is arrived. Next a lorry that is equiped with a special tank transports gathered milk to a factory, where the raw milk is transformed into various milk products, such as pasteurized milk, cheese, cream and butter. Once milk is delivered, it is being proceeded with dairy, where milk is being pasteurized and different fractions are separated to produce different products. At the final stage, milk and other manufactured foods are packed, followed by transporting to local grosseries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'highlights'.
Suggestion: highlights
The picture highlight the various stages involved in the prod...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an automotive manner" with adverb for "automotive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...achine to extract raw milk from animals in an automotive manner twice a day. After that, milk is conser...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32450331126 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89048382024 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682119205298 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0398434295 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252404112887 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10908157032 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399764598957 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198088197215 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273929233622 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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