Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
Nowadays, death sentence is considered to be acceptable for murderers and molesters by some people, while others insist on prohibiting this as an obsolete measure in modern society. Although death penalty can serve a preventive tool against cruel crimes, I strongly believe that no judicial system is perfect and error of justice can send innocent people to heaven.
Criminals who was imprisoned for violent crimes are tend to violate laws once they are out of a jail. Such people have usually aquired a hatred to the society for stolen years of their lives. Therefore, their incorporation with other individuals becomes complicated, leading ex-convicts to sociopathic lifestyle. For example, according to the United States administration, about forty percent of rapists in jails were charged repeatedly. Thus, death penalty can potentially prevent a huge number of lives to be destroyed and make the social environment a safer place.
However, even one false positive decidion, which causes a death of an innocent person, is an exorbitant price for the humanity. Provided that every sentence is originated from a human being, who makes mistakes, anyone must not allow judges to take lives. Moreover, every individual has to be able to prove their innocence despite the time they require. For instance, more than the quarter of killers in China were rehabilitated only after their deaths. In other words, imperfection of a judicial system entails a number of died civilians that have never committed any crime.
In conclusion, capital punishment prevents molesters and others from repeating crimes. However, due to mistakes, not only guilty prisoners would be killed, what makes death penalty as an invalid punishment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: tended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82571961773 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674074074074 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3944518869 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234408084348 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694786496356 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387791465127 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140673461844 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291354012362 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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