An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?
Highly educated persons have been playing a vital role of modern day societies. The rise in immigration among skilled workers from developing countries to rich societies is becoming a considerable issue for the poorer states. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with work immigration and propose some viable solutions to it.
The lack of doctors deteriorates health care system making locals suffer from various diseases that cannot be addressed. Due to absense of expertise, a number of workers lose their jobs due to health issues, what entails stagnation in economics. Another formidable issue is the immigration of teachers overseas, which decreases an amount of educated alumnis. Without them manufacturers are not able to improve their production lines; therefore they cannot increase taxes to support government. For instance, according to the report of the university of New York, professional immigration decreases the growth of the GDP of a country for about ten percent a year. In other words, if highly skilled employees leave a country, the economy of the state is not able to reach its potential.
In order to overcome the mentioned issues, government should either forbid people that obtained tertiery education to leave the state or should allocate bigger budgets for important professions such as doctors and teachers. Since universities are usually funded by local authorities, individuals that have obtained a bachelor's degree should pay a debt for the society by working for it for ten years after graduation. Another possible approach is to keep people by providing a productive and generous envirenment by aiding doctors and teachers financially. Thus, a country's economy benefits, increase an overall development of the state and make professionals from the overseas migrating and boosting national economy.
In conclusion, this essay has highlighted the major problems caused by the skilled immigration as well as has suggested some feasible solutions to it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50161812298 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93997226418 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618122977346 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0481447295 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229166517122 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652714856335 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400283764888 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123738940979 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169620908656 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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