The picture illustrates the procedure of producing electricity through water processing in various steps.
Overall, the production of electricity begins with the evaporation of sea water by heat of sun and ends with the distribution of electricity in schools and hospitals.
To begin with, sunlight falls into sea water and water get hot. The next step the water evaporate into cloud then the cloud turns into rain. After falling rain into the reservoir a dam is use for hold the rain water so that it can blow
through a valve which is use for controlling the water flow. Following which water get into turbine, where it rotate for producing power, the water return to a pump to go to reservoir for repeating the process. After producing the electricity, it transfer to the tower which is connected with another tower by high voltage cables. The tower transfer the electricity to the transformer station through two high voltage cables.
Transformation station supply electricity to various places such as houses, mills, and hospitals and schools through underground cables.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hold the rain water so that it can blow through a valve which is use for control...
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Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rotates'?
Suggestion: rotates
... which water get into turbine, where it rotate for producing power, the water return t...
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Line 6, column 248, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'transfers'?
Suggestion: transfers
...ss. After producing the electricity, it transfer to the tower which is connected with an...
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Line 6, column 342, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'transfers'.
Suggestion: transfers
...tower by high voltage cables. The tower transfer the electricity to the transformer stat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20571428571 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79717641889 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3899210041 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138558192751 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631573620131 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495568907284 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735250877651 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531306781871 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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