The diagram shows how hydro-electric power is generated.

Essay topics:

The diagram shows how hydro-electric power is generated.

The diagram illustrates the process of producing hydropower.

Overall, there are seven main stages in the production of hydroelectricity, from water evaporation to the electricity used for various purposes.

At the first stage of the hydro-electric power production, heat from the sun causes seawater to evaporate, which results in the formation of clouds and rains afterwards. A reservoir, which formed by a side of the mountain and a dam, serves to contain the rainwater.

At the next stage, rainwater passes through a valve to a turbine. Inside this turbine, the water is either converted into electricity which is then passed through cables or goes to a pump which pushes it back to the reservoir.

Regarding the electricity travelling through high voltage cables, it will then arrives at a station where the transformation happens to make it ready for use. Finally, usable electricity travelled through underground cables which transport it to households, plants, hospitals and schools.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, regarding, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52903225806 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1768281749 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7768316572 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136116548312 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05600526844 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046932504933 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736956330655 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305710127517 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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