Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different opinions on which path to take after finishing school. While there are sound arguments for both college and an immediate job, in my view, it depends on the person's profession preferences
Firstly, some professions require in-depth knowledge and a high level of skill that must be developed under the instruction of experts in respective fields. For example, a surgeon needs to be equipped with extensive medical knowledge to react quickly to various situations including death-and-life ones. This knowledge should come from a formal educational context which guarantees both the quality of the teaching materials and able instructors as well as the quality of the output, and college and university are known to be the best place.
On the other hand, academic education plays no role in some types of occupations. For example, hairdressers or footballers could be extremely successful even they are college drop-outs since their skills are acquired through hands-on practice and training that colleges typically do not have to offer. Therefore, going to college is not only a longer route for them but also a waste of time and resources. Moreover, some people who are not bookish or intellectual find the college's environment hard to flourish. By going into a job straight after school, they can explore their non-academic abilities and tap into them instead of investing in something they do not have the potential.
In conclusion, whether opting for higher education or starting a career immediately after school depends on people's desired occupation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35341365462 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90542750863 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654618473896 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8593494015 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.3 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22461697584 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810421978642 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370166391505 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132653942651 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549043043275 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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