Topic: Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?
Technological advances have been infiltrating every aspect of life and transformed the lifestyles of both adults and children. Young children now spend a larger amount of time than ever on computer games and less involve in sports and other physical activities. There can be many reasons for this and this trend is undoubtedly a negative development.
Easy access to computers and other technological gadgets is one of the main reasons. As computers have become cheaper and working parents have less time for their children, computer game consoles are seen as an inexpensive distraction for children when they need their parents’ attention. Indeed, adults are not aware of the detrimental effects of computers have for the development of their teenagers and continue to use them for the sake of the entertainment of their children.
Firstly, it is widely acknowledged that there is a link between lack of exercises and child obesity. In fact, inaction and insufficient physical activities lead to a wider range of adolescent diseases such as type-II diabetes, cardiovascular diseases and mental ailments. Secondly, computer game addiction adversely affected children’s academic performance and achievement in schools. Since a large amount of time is wasted on computer games, there is little time for exercises and exam revision
In conclusion, the disproportionate portion of time that children allocate for computer games, sports as well as schoolwork results from the ready availability and lack of full understanding of their parents about its effects, and this is clearly a harmful lifestyle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52016129032 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17233658884 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.3692989055 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.9 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252067831873 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879913160315 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707643983429 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149662277763 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336340742306 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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