The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
The given diagrams indicate information about the main stages which take place in the life cycle of salmon known as a species of large fish.
Overall, there are three main stages in the salmon's life cycle, beginning with salmon eggs in the upper river and ending with adult salmon. The complete life cycle lasts for approximately 10 years.
Firstly, the life cycle of salmon begin as eggs in the low-moving upper reaches of a river, are laid at places amid reeds and pebbles. After approximately 5 to 6 months, the eggs hatch into fry with the length of 3 to 8 centimeters. The fry then follow the fast flow to the lower river and inhabit here for a longer time, roughly 4 years until they reach 12 to 15 centimeters long. These grown fishes are known as smolt.
At the next stage of life cycle, the smolt migrate to the open sea. After about 5 years living in the ocean, they will have grown to adult salmon, which is about 70 to 76 centimeters long. The reproduction stage begins as the mature salmon migrate upstream to their birthplace to spawn/. The salmon's life cycle starts again in the same place where it begins.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'salmons'' or 'salmon's'?
Suggestion: salmons'; salmon's
...all, there are three main stages in the salmons life cycle, beginning with salmon eggs ...
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Line 4, column 292, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'salmons'' or 'salmon's'?
Suggestion: salmons'; salmon's
...ream to their birthplace to spawn/. The salmons life cycle starts again in the same pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54187192118 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32009768333 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5192126498 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8181818182 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279468788454 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109209015996 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102825917611 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202507523855 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106849589897 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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