The diagrams give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.
The diagrammatic representation elucidates how fish pies are produced in factories with four main ingredients:salmon, potatoes, peas and sauce.
Overall, it can be manifested that the process of fish pie can be divided in two steps which is production of potatoes and how Salamon is made. Notably, the fish pie process is more labor-intensive.
First of all, potatoes are delivered a month in advance and once they have reached the factory they are cleaned with a Jet spray to remove any impurities. On a conveyor belt, the potatoes are passed ahead for removing the skin and chopping in adequate size and following this, potatoes slices are boiled in a container before being allowed to cool off in wat and finally stored for their process.
Simultaneously, within twelve hours of being delivered to the factory, the piece of fresh fish is cooked in steam in the oven after adding lemon juice and salt to it. Then, skin and bones are removed before a visual inspection takes place. After this, peas and sauce which have been prepared in advance are added, and a layer of potatoe slices are mixed to top it off which is all wrapped and frozen. Lastly, they are either dispatched or store for the delivery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pie can be divided in two steps which is production of potatoes and how Salamon i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, lastly, then, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79202813919 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599033816425 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.047305473 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101933041943 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467572056962 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524563246033 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715274329771 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515396234095 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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