Expected city visits by country of origin for 2018 thousands year

Essay topics:

Expected city visits by country of origin for 2018 (thousands/year)

The bar chart illustrates the estimated number of visitors from 3 countries namely usa, canada and mexico traveling to four cities in the year 2018.

Overall, marid is expected to be the most attractive tourist attraction. Also, the predicted number of travelers from usa is largest in comparision with canada and mexico.

As can be seen from the chart, approximately 100 thousand travellers from usa is expected to visit marid, compared to 80 thousand and 70 thousand people from canada and mexico respectively. In contrast, the estimated number tourists coming to Liverpool is significant lower with about 50 thousand travelers from usa, 30 thousand and 20 thousand travelers from canada and mexico respectively.

Looking at the chart in more detail, 80 thousand people from usa is expected to visit roma, followed by 50 thousand travelers from canada. On the contrary, mexico had the lowest figure, with only 20 thousand people visiting roma. Meanwhile, the predicted figures for Paris is relatively similar, with just over 60 thousand people from each country.

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Average: 9.2 (10 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, in contrast, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34117647059 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77978366637 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5213668788 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234133128482 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111035376372 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598341154753 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144575637461 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623872553821 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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