The figure shows the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries. The participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people
The bar chart provide data on the opinions of 1000 teenagers in five nations on the age at which particular privileges and duties should be bestowed upon the young.
Generally speaking, the expected average age at which more rights and responsibilities are accessible is the highest in Japan. In addition, the lower age limit for voting rights is universally agreed to be equal or lower than that for getting married with Egypt being the only exception.
In details, the ages permitted to get married, to vote and to be tried in a court law for committing a crime are the highest in Japan, at 22, 20 and 18, respectively. In contrast, 18 years of age is the mark to get married in the USA and UK, followed by the 16-year-old mark in Mexico and Egypt.
The lower age limit for voting rights is the same for the US participants, but lower for Egypt (17), Mexico and the UK (both at 16). However, while adolescents in the USA think that 12, which is the lowest age limit in any category in any country, is illegible for standing trials for criminal acts, other countries, with the exception of Japan, expected it to be generally higher, around 14 and 15.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... Japan, at 22, 20 and 18, respectively. In contrast, 18 years of age is the mark t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icipants, but lower for Egypt 17, Mexico and the UK both at 16. However, while ad...
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Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...als for criminal acts, other countries, with the exception of Japan, expected it to be generally high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59903381643 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65718049485 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3201761619 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171884481662 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898852831022 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490553827555 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119575612818 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048120711055 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.