The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise this information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two pie chart represents the information about
the energy consumption of Australian
home and emission of greenhouse gas from using the energy.
Overall, it can be seen that Australian uses almost half energy in heating,
Whereas, water heating causes the emission of greenhouse gas are significantly higher than others.
Heating makes up the largest proportion of household energy consumption of approximately 42%. While its effect on greenhouse gas emission is only 14 %. Heating water requires as much as 30 percent of the total energy expenditure, which has almost a similar effect on air pollution in the form of harmful gas emissions.
Refrigeration, cooling, and lighting energy use are almost negligible at 7%, @%, and 4% respectively. Other appliances
consumes around 15% of the energy in the house.
As compared to the emission of greenhouse gas from the energy, Water heating
causes more emission of gas is significantly higher of around 32% which is highest among others. Heating was the most energy consumption but it releases only 15% of gas. Other appliances, lighting, and refrigeration energy use cause almost double the amount of gas emission.
However, Cooling energy and gas emission has a difference of only 1% which is negligible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: charts
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Suggestion:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nergy consumption of approximately 42%. While its effect on greenhouse gas emission i...
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...%, and 4% respectively. Other appliances consumes around 15% of the energy in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99373590373 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0196956623 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1818181818 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 3.83414634146 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305548921272 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130574358106 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612582665125 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138708855091 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044550796835 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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