The first chart below shows how energy used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which results from this energy use.
The first pie chart describes information about the percentage of energy which is used in an Australian household. The second pie chart illustrates the data about how much greenhouse gas emitted by using this energy.
Overall, what stands out from the first graph is heating and water heating are largest parts of energy consumption, while the other graph shows water heating and other appliances are take significant amount of greenhouse gas emission.
The energy spending in Australia to their needs (heating, water heating, refrigeration, cooling, lighting and other appliances). The most energy used for heating and water heating which are 42% and 30%, respectively. Other appliances and refrigeration consist of lower amount energy that 15% and 7%, respectively. The remaining energy is provided for cooling (2%) and lighting (4%).
The emission of greenhouse gas is distinctive from energy usage. The significant part of greenhouse gas emission comprises both water heating and other appliances which are 32% and 28%, respectively. Refrigeration and heating are similar that are 14% and 15%, respectively. The rest of gas emission are due to the lighting and cooling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the largest'.
Suggestion: are the largest
...irst graph is heating and water heating are largest parts of energy consumption, while the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rovided for cooling 2% and lighting 4%. The emission of greenhouse gas is distin...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e gas is distinctive from energy usage. The significant part of greenhouse gas emis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44505494505 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96102872328 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494505494505 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4312028971 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367838340751 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145898713206 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113643535029 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227530464373 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127617694051 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.