The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts demonstrate household energy usage proration in Australia and its contribution of greenhouse gas emissions. The largest consumed energy is from heating, including water heating, accounted for 72 percent, but the top greenhouse gas emissions come from other household energy all together, which are, refrigeration, other appliances, lighting, and cooling.
As obviously seen from the first pie chart, most of the energy is spent on heating, amounted to 42 percent, followed by water heating amounted to 30 percent, combined both together occupied three quarters of total energy usage, which makes other energy usage not so significant.
However, it’s the insignificant energy use that be responsible for the largest greenhouse gas emissions, with a number of 53 percent in total. Take refrigeration, other appliances and lighting for instances, their gas emissions are almost doubled compared to their household usage rate, while water heating and cooling emit almost as much greenhouse gas as they are used. More interestingly, though it is heating that is most frequently used, its greenhouse gas contribution was only 15 percent, about a third of its household energy use.
To summarize, it’s the other less frequently used household functions that produce the most greenhouse gas, even though heating including water heating use more energy.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'third', 'while', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28870292887 0.268076937826 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.1589958159 0.116061578633 137% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0836820083682 0.0759168565197 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0753138075314 0.0366838410393 205% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0292887029289 0.0131127313244 223% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0962343096234 0.155750635184 62% => OK
Participles: 0.0753138075314 0.0379272487307 199% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.91838574283 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0167364016736 0.0210936926555 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0585774058577 0.0948980150116 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167364016736 0.00967000014798 173% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1375.0 1161.00487805 118% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.9 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.57894736842 5.90752243213 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73763899035 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.425837320574 0.337110787985 126% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.334928229665 0.247514529752 135% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.277511961722 0.171178102325 162% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.186602870813 0.112407865282 166% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91838574283 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569377990431 0.546246751206 104% => OK
Word variations: 53.301251424 49.3433353143 108% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 29.8571428571 23.0094962315 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5186070039 42.9750493124 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.428571429 135.714022679 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 23.0094962315 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.689975730869 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 63.3499658237 47.7609492067 133% => OK
Elegance: 1.74603174603 2.94281807926 59% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.418131533498 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.189985272462 0.181151798455 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108928049207 0.0850326197045 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.735405072795 0.706616315825 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191081191505 0.157042692854 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.228904883108 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.108899403657 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.312438825524 0.367819155151 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0684645816166 0.0812612215331 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.316326947829 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0921553760075 0% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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