The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate how the salmon lives in its whole life, which is a quite a large fish in its species.
First of all, the salmon eggs reside around small stones under reeds for approximately five to six months in the slow moving upper river, before they go to lower river where water flows fast. At this later stage, they are called “fry”, a small salmon infant, whose size varies from 3 to 8 cm. After four years, they will grow into 12 to 15 cm, when they will also be called “smolt”, which will continue to grow to as large as 70 to 76 cm, in open sea area, where they will spend ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214659685864 0.268076937826 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.130890052356 0.116061578633 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0680628272251 0.0759168565197 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0523560209424 0.0366838410393 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0575916230366 0.0131127313244 439% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109947643979 0.155750635184 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0261780104712 0.0379272487307 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.19246902264 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0523560209424 0.0210936926555 248% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0732984293194 0.0948980150116 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.020942408377 0.00437022459523 479% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0418848167539 0.00967000014798 433% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 928.0 1161.00487805 80% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.9 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45882352941 5.90752243213 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.241176470588 0.337110787985 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.129411764706 0.247514529752 52% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0647058823529 0.171178102325 38% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0470588235294 0.112407865282 42% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.19246902264 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.546246751206 121% => OK
Word variations: 65.7418803068 49.3433353143 133% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 28.3333333333 23.0094962315 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4203606559 42.9750493124 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.666666667 135.714022679 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 23.0094962315 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.689975730869 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 41.2745098039 47.7609492067 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.45652173913 2.94281807926 49% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.418131533498 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141976648252 0.181151798455 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0400133807085 0.0850326197045 47% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.715934205877 0.706616315825 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.211020734787 0.157042692854 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.228904883108 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.108899403657 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.190855118204 0.367819155151 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0512454193567 0.0812612215331 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.316326947829 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0921553760075 0% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 3.0 7.1512195122 42% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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