The flow char shows how sweaters are manufactured in a garment factory in Bangladesh

Essay topics:

The flow char shows how sweaters are manufactured in a

garment factory in Bangladesh.

This flow chart illustrates that the way of garment factory is manufacturing sweaters in Bangladesh.

Overall, after the collection of yarn and with help of sixteen steps, shipment procedures for the product can be go ahead,

Firstly, there is a section where yarn need to be winded and distributed. After that output product go to nex steps of knitting start of sweater panels and gradually it comes to the steps of trimming.Then it goes to light checking and mending where the production check that if it any problem found , it will send bact to 2nd procedure of yard winding and distribution.

Again, after completion of checking ,it comes to next section of making button hole. After that it gradually follw washing, labeling, ironing, accordingly. And after final inspection the product will be ready for shipment.

Votes
Average: 6.3 (6 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...ually it comes to the steps of trimming.Then it goes to light checking and mending w...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ction check that if it any problem found , it will send bact to 2nd procedure of y...
^^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... Again, after completion of checking ,it comes to next section of making butto...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83750181013 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.0431436823 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0939477078139 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648138440866 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132811987245 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963337591403 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153078798524 0.0819641961636 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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