A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
I disagree with the fact that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum untill they enter college.
All studends should have choise to take their favourite subjects to go for their passion. If the same national curriculum is drawn in front of students ,then students become bound to take the subjects which is not interesting to them.
As example , some students like science ,on the contrary some students might like math .all the students have different passions to go for .
Moreover,all the parents have different income . all the parents can not bear their childs educational expenses equally.Expensive schooling tution are really tough to bear for lower income parents.as example , In town , educated parents can bear a sufficient money for their childrens but a farmer from village can not bear highly expensive tution fees .
Even, all the teachers are not equally capable of taking all the subjects . Some teachers are expert in math , where some are in language. if they are bound to take their unexpert subjects then the result of the teaching students will not be fruitful.students can not learn the proper teaching.
Again, to keep pace with the modern world , some english medium schools are establishing their curriculum with more additional subjects to hanhance their students knowledge . So that students can become more advanced in knowledge to reach
I disagree with the fact that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum untill they enter college.
All studends should have choise to take their favourite subjects to go for their passion. If the same national curriculum is drawn in front of students ,then students become bound to take the subjects which is not interesting to them.
As example , some students like science ,on the contrary some students might like math .all the students have different passions to go for .
Moreover,all the parents have different income . all the parents can not bear their childs educational expenses equally.Expensive schooling tution are really tough to bear for lower income parents.as example , In town , educated parents can bear a sufficient money for their childrens but a farmer from village can not bear highly expensive tution fees .
Even, all the teachers are not equally capable of taking all the subjects . Some teachers are expert in math , where some are in language. if they are bound to take their unexpert subjects then the result of the teaching students will not be fruitful.students can not learn the proper teaching.
Again, to keep pace with the modern world , some english medium schools are establishing their curriculum with more additional subjects to hanhance their students knowledge . So that students can become more advanced in knowledge to reach
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, then, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24778761062 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76432312378 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535398230088 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2903071037 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23105351039 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102721172038 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14787743476 0.0758088955206 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160893785568 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176548623162 0.0667264976115 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.