Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this mordern decade, knowledge sharing is very essential for people. While some people argue that information should be shared as much as possible in technological advancement,trade and the academic world, others insist that some important news should be discussed openly. This eassy will illustrate about both view points and my opinions also.
Knowledge is power for every nation of the country.Developed countries has developed lots of research area and these research have brought excellent results which have major impact of human being for their well being.If these reseach methods are shared with another countries researcher , they might also be beneficial.For instance, some researcher in united states apply some method to develop the seasonal vaccine to protect people from virus and flu which are very harmful for human health and with the help of these methods some prominent irish researcher developed another human life savaing vaccine which brought a new hope in medical science history.Moreover, foreign countries where technology is advance, are taking steps to develop their kids in classes and these process can be shared with developing countries so that they also can contribute that process to their nations.For example,some countries as like China,Japan and USA included the programming subject as mandatory from the early childhood in curriculum.Consequently students are becoming well in coding and have better techno future.Some countries are following this methods in their curruculum and they also developing their students as like those countries.
However, sharing some important research openly can bring deathly cause.In my opinion, sometimes we can have bad impact in the world by openly sharing.For example, some country makes atomic weapon reseach for their necccessary. If this research is shared openly, criminals can use this method for deadly purpose which is very harmful for every human being.
In conclusion, sharing information in research area has brought some kindness to human being.On the other hand we should keep remember that sharing openly can cause death for human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60185185185 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93769623542 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54012345679 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 383.543042312 49.4020404114 776% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 259.285714286 106.682146367 243% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.2857142857 20.7667163134 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.8571428571 7.06120827912 281% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235706226133 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136843268991 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106991913466 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184912522523 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873437410369 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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