Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this modern decade, knowledge sharing is very essential for people. While some people argue that information should be shared as much as possible in technological advancement, trade and the academic world, others insist that some important news should be discussed openly. This essay will illustrate both viewpoints and my opinions also.
Knowledge is the power for every nation of the country. Developed countries have developed lots of research area and these research have brought excellent results which have a major impact on the human being for their well being. If these reseach methods are shared with other country's researchers, they might also be beneficial. For instance, some researcher in united states applies some method to develop the seasonal vaccine to protect people from virus and flu which are very harmful to human health and with the help of these methods some prominent Irish researcher-developed another human life-saving vaccine which brought a new hope in medical science history. Moreover, foreign countries where technology is advanced, are taking steps to develop their kids in classes and these processes can be shared with developing countries so that they also can contribute that process to their nations. For example, some countries like China, Japan, and the USA included the programming subject as mandatory from early childhood in curriculum. Consequently, students are becoming well in coding and have a better techno future. Some countries are following this method in their curriculum and they also developing their students like those countries.
However, sharing some important research openly can bring deathly cause. In my opinion, sometimes we can have a bad impact on the world by openly sharing. For example, some country makes atomic weapon research for their necessary. If this research is shared openly, criminals can use this method for the deadly purpose which is very harmful to every human being.
In conclusion, sharing information in the research area has brought some kindness to human beings. On the other hand, we should keep remembering that sharing openly can cause death for a human beings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ustrate both viewpoints and my opinions also. Knowledge is the power for every ...
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Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
...ring openly can cause death for a human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38938053097 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68587594073 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525073746313 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9671205203 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.470588235 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252098656802 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911815760844 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923863959608 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192057321713 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748841233265 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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