A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Tina,
Hope you are doing great. I am happy that you will visit my house during my vacation. My trip with friends is likely to happen in mid of August. I will be reachable in landline of my hotel since connectivity is poor. I have enclosed you the details of my contact details for your reference.
You can make use of it if you need it.
I am glad, because my puppy will stay with you. Please give him food in right time. He will be happy to roam around in the park during evening. Take him for a stroll. He will be your best companion in my absence. Do not give him red meat, he will not eat it. You can give him pedigree, which is stored in refrigerator.
Garbage will be collected every Friday, hence make sure that you dispose it. You will be warned by house owner who stays in basement if you miss to clean the garden,
It would be great if you can take care of it. In case, if you require any guidance then you can reach out to Holmes who resides in my adjacent flat.
He can asssit you with nearby supermarket if you are in need of getting any items urgently.
Hope you will find good time in my place.
Regards,
Priyankaa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'miss cleaning'.
Suggestion: miss cleaning
...ouse owner who stays in basement if you miss to clean the garden, It would be great if you ...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asement if you miss to clean the garden, It would be great if you can take care o...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 1.00243902439 1696% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 5.60731707317 838% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22171945701 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17202111483 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556561085973 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.870595313 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.8333333333 112.824112599 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2777777778 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 5.23603664747 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185685788282 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659709166644 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693979295224 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100339878969 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403300698154 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 13.2329268293 35% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 61.2550243902 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 11.4140731707 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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