The given flow chart shows the various sources of natural gas and the way it is distributed.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The given flow chart shows the various sources of natural gas and the way it is distributed.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given chart describes the distribution flow of Natural gas and its sources from where it is obtained.
The main sources for Natural gas are from the Gas wells, Oil wells and importing through ships from distant places. The distribution occurs from regional pipeline in various steps by transporting it to retail consumers.
Gas from its sources is refined before reaching the underground storage at refineries and plants. Once after the gas reaches the storage it is then distributed in pipelines to banks located at different regions. Later, from these storages, it then distributed using road containers and rail wagons to retail storages and further to retail consumers in small amounts.
On a glance, it can be seen that wagons have a capacity of 24,000 litres and are little expensive due to rail lines whereas, containers have larger storage of 40,000 litres and can be transported through roads. The retail storage has a capacity of 120,000 litres from where it is further distributed using small delivery trucks holding a capacity of 12,000 litres to retail consumers.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ting through ships from distant places. The distribution occurs from regional pipel...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...round storage at refineries and plants. Once after the gas reaches the storage it is...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ON_FIRST_GLANCE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at'?
Suggestion: At
... to retail consumers in small amounts. On a glance, it can be seen that wagons ha...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17045454545 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68333450969 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.19276764 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125396043895 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757100465459 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095042872069 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121839977956 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110828362457 0.0819641961636 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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