The graph below the difference in wheat exports over three different areas.

Essay topics:

The graph below the difference in wheat exports over three different areas.

The linear layout highlights the information about the difference in wheat exports by three different nations : Australia , Canada and European Community . The data is calibrated in millions of tonnes which is clearly and coherently representated .
overall , it is clearly seen that the maximum wheat exports by Canada and European Community , whereas maximum wheat exports by Australia in the given time period.
To begin with, In 1985 , The wheat exports start with 15 millions of tonnes by Australia, Afterthat it had been show slowly inclined trend by 16 millions of tonnes. Moreover , The wheat exports was show dramatically declined trend in the year of 1998 ,but In the year from 1989 to 1990 , it was remain same. Furthermore , The wheat exports start with 19 millions of tonnes by Canada. Afterwards , it had been show inclined trend by 20 millions of tonnes in 1987 but In the year 1988 , it was at the level of peak by 25 and 20 millions of tonnes in the year 1989 and 1990 respectively .

Apart from all that , The wheat exports by European Community by 17 millions of tonnes. Then , it had been show moved down trend by 15 millions of tonnes but it were 19 and 21 millions of tonnes in 1989 and 1990 respectively.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, then, whereas, apart from, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6779391376 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438095238095 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.997530788 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 1.69756097561 2180% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174418041051 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946598401055 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103837850689 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138814354116 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872923074042 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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