Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports or not? Discuss both points of view.
"Sports play an important role in life " Nonetheless , some issues remain unchallenged and as complex as ever. one such issue here is of should dangerous sports ban or not? Through this essay , I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples, assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
Taking one side of argument, there are people who believe that government should ban dangerous sports. They raise many assertions in defence such as dangerous sports are telecast on television and that sports are watching by the children after that they are trying dangerous sports at their home The best epitome is that the survey conducted by the "Hindustan Time " one young children doing these types of activity at their home and his hand was fractured.
On the flip side , there are people who believe that every people have freedom to do any activity. They bolster their view point by claiming that if people doing sports as they can participate in sports competition as well as they show there talent in front of the others.Moreover, with the help of these sports people can gain name and fame as these sports are very beneficial.
As , we have seen number of answers for this question . on balance; However, I tend to believe that people should pay any activity but do not play at there home . Government should implement strictest rule and regulations regarding the dangerous sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99578059072 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68618700073 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561181434599 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.0033683613 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311201574152 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123496363786 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900180555596 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17382284757 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257585086888 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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