Some people say that self-employment is better than working for a company or institution. Discuss both points of view. What is your opinion?
"Money is just like sea water. The more you drink, the thristier you become". The given topic asserts that, which occupation is better; either self-employment or working under company. Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side there are groups of people who believe that self-employment is better for personal developement. They strengthen this view point by claiming that, it provides the opportunity to do experiments. A good illustration of this is, self-employed person can pool in more money which is bolstered by experiments and innovations. The person can not only gain profits but can become responsible and multi-tasker as well. Take, for example, Microsoft's Bill Gates, a self-employed person, whose briliant insight helped him to pioneer new territory in the world of computer software.
Contrary to this, there are some antagonists who believe that working for company is better kind of employment. To make this arguement convincing they claim that, an affiliate enjoys fixed salaries and fewer responsibilities. Since, they work under an organisation therefore they are less bothered about the mangement of staff and the losses which a company suffers. A recent survey conducted by Harvard University shows that nearly about 60 percent of Indians work under companies and are statisfied, since they do not experience the burden of running a company.
Nevertheless, after throughly considering both the options, I believe that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that an effective clap requires both use of hands so, it depends on personal choice whether self-employment or working under company is better.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11339415116 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632727272727 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9222527413 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241507257191 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789497364657 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734784701911 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137384352059 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329192202261 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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