The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

Essay topics:

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The line graph provides sufficient information about the united States of America energy consumption by fuel from 1980 with predicts until 2030 in a duration of 50 years from a 2008 report.
Overall, as it can be seen petrol and oil are the most useful energy and increase in the period.
As is given in the chart, there was a rise in the consumption of petrol and oil, coal, and natural gas. In 1980, the quantity of using petrol and oil was about 35 quadrillion units, whereas coal and natural gas were a little more than 15 and about 20 respectively. On the other hand, nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower were equal to each other at almost 4 in the same year. petrol and oil have fluctuate trend between 1980 and 1995. After that, a gradual upward trend occurred until the last year of the time span and will stand on roughly 50. coal and natural gas had a meditrade climb and will reach about 30 and approximately 25 in 2030 respectively. Finally, hydropower has a level out trend by almost 5 quadrillion, while nuclear and solar/wind remain static with a tiny leap during the period.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Petrol
...ach other at almost 4 in the same year. petrol and oil have fluctuate trend between 19...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'fluctuated'.
Suggestion: fluctuated
...4 in the same year. petrol and oil have fluctuate trend between 1980 and 1995. After that...
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Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Coal
...time span and will stand on roughly 50. coal and natural gas had a meditrade climb a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 771, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lear and solar/wind remain static with a tiny leap during the period.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56156797806 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620512820513 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6484803384 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234912539756 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885985015112 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132677293302 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197672263453 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186003891795 0.0819641961636 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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