The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The line chart illustrates how much waste was released by three companies from 2000 to 2015.
Overall, it is clear that both A and B companies witnessed a significant decrease in their amount of waste while there is an upward trend for company C’s waste output in the same period.
In 2000, company A accounted for a large number of wastes with 12 tonnes, and the consumption experienced a slight decrease to about 11 tonnes by 2015. Subsequently, the waste output of company A continued to reduce but more steeply to 8 tonnes in 2015, which was the lowest point in the entire period surveyed.
Next, waste production of company B released to around 8 tonnes in 2000 but this increased gradually to 10 tonnes by 2005. Following this, there was a sharp drop in the amount of waste of company B, reducing to 3 tonnes in 2015.
In contrast, 4 tonnes of company C’s waste output were produced in 2000 and the consumption rose gradually to 6 tonnes over the next 5 years. The amount of waste output then increased significantly to 10 tonnes by 2015.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y C’s waste output in the same period. In 2000, company A accounted for a large...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...d. In 2000, company A accounted for a large number of wastes with 12 tonnes, and the consumpt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68449197861 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65613417535 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524064171123 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9211164627 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249361394768 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131730598229 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449623328006 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159930346126 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350653815575 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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