The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The line chart illustrates the average numbers of British passengers who travel every day by automobile, bus, or train between the years 1970 and 2030, Measured in million
In general, it can be observed that the using of cars and trains has increased and is expected to keep increasing along the given period, while the users of bus decline at the end of the period.
Beginning with cars, it can be seen that, 5 million English passengers drove cars for 10 years (1970-1980) to move between areas. In 2000 the number of motorists rose significantly to approximately 7 million. Then it remained stable until 2010. The expectation for the number of commuters will grow to around 8 million and 9 million in 2020, and 2030 respectively.
Moving to the use of trains, the number of commuters was around 2 million in 1970, then increased gradually to 3 million in 2000. The number remained the same until 2010. While the prediction of travelers by train will jump rapidly to 5 million, which is less than using cars.
Finally, it can be witnessed, the bus was the basic means of transportation in their movement in 1970, around 4 million, whereas this number will be decreased slowly to 3 million by 2030, which the lowest means of transportation in 2030 by UK passengers.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...en the years 1970 and 2030, Measured in million In general, it can be observed that th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then, whereas, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78181818182 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77382988509 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554545454545 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.745002633 43.030603864 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.888888889 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270070618023 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10207402592 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074844122537 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165013718556 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897252660045 0.0819641961636 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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